Outstanding
i've waited until your rating has gone down to add my review. i've noticed that your last 3 brankenwood stories ended with a rating of 4.24 when they are all seperately, and collectively, the best flashes on this site. They always start with a high rating, as this one did, but slowly erode away when the more immature and pety visitors have their say.
If anything deserved a perfect 5, it would be your animations. in a word, they are flawless. my only suggestion would be to throw an anime cloud shaped like an unnamed pokemon trainer. maybe then you could get the little dweeb vote. if that doesn't work, try having your characters crap dragonballs...dragonballs that cut themselves because people don't understand them. that would help with the emo vote.
and if all that still doesn't get you your five, try throwing a random insult to ebaumsworld in there. that should put you over the top.